You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to participate in the interview at the time you suggested in
this
invitation. I am trying to be accepted to study at your University since I moved to Canada, and when I received your email informing me that my subscription would be analysed, I celebrated it as a victory for me.
However
, I am looking for a job, and, unfortunately, I already have an appointment at the same time.
Thus
far, that was our
first
contact and I am so sorry for losing
this
opportunity,
moreover
, it would be a shame for me to delay for six months waiting for the
next
term.
Although
I have the information that the interview schedule is crowded, I was wondering if you could change my interview to the
next
day. Considering that it will be possible, I would like to know how long you intend to proceed with
this
analysis and if will be necessary another tests. I am looking forward to your answer and I that we can arrange it properly. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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