The cost of flying as decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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The world has become a global village as travelling cost has reduced drastically over the
last
10-20 years. There are certain benefits as well as setbacks.
Although
import-export among countries has improved their Income and reserves, the increasing number of accidents has become a drawback. Globalization has helped nations improve their finance and foreign exchange.
In other words
, countries that become global will exchange money in different currencies.
Therefore
, it will enhance their exports resulting in more foreign currency as buyers from all over the globe will become their customers. LPG policy,
for example
, before 1991, India's economy was about to collapse due to low foreign reserves, and the country had negative GDP.
However
, with the help of LPG policy, they became global,
as a result
, in 1996, GDP was 4% compared to minus 5%, 4 years back.
Hence
, travelling has reduced the import-export cost,
subsequently
, the country's income.
On the other hand
, accidents in aeroplanes have increased drastically in the recent past.
That is
to say that air traffic has risen in the
last
10 years because people travel between nations daily for business purposes. Nepal plane crash,
for instance
, on 15 January 2023, a flight running from India to Nepal crashed in Kathmandu, with 250 casualties and almost 100 seriously injured. It is a severe setback because it results in losing precious lives. In conclusion, even though there are monetary benefits in terms of enhanced finances, the lost lives due to crashes are the major setback.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global connectivity
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Tourism boost
  • Carbon emissions
  • Environmental degradation
  • Overtourism
  • Local resources
  • Infrastructure strain
  • Travel accessibility
  • Economic backgrounds
  • Commercialization
  • Dilution of local cultures
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