Few countries think that people aged below 30 can do things like vote for country, marriage, getting driving license etc… while most of the countries oppose. What do you think ?

Undoubtedly,
age
plays a very important role in daily
tasks
of
day to day
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life
. There have been contrasting views of countries regarding
age
groups appropriate for voting, getting married or getting
driving
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a driving
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license etc. Some countries believe that the perfect
age
for accomplishing these
tasks
is below 30 while
majority
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disagreed. According to me,
age
cannot be ignored for certain things but not for every task. Certainly, there are some physical or medical reasons
of
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incorporating
age
factor
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factors
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for the
tasks
like voting, marriage or driving
licensce
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license
licence
.
People
below 30 are more
enthuastic
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enthusiastic
towards achieving goals and have
spark
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a spark
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of learning new skills.
This
energy gradually
start
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decreasing with increasing
age
and stability. Due to hormonal changes in
body
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which get triggered at
particular
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age
,
age
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factor is considered crucial in getting married. Late marriages can affect reproduction resulting in unhealthy children.
Similarly
, driving is another very important skill which the person requires for his/her social, economic and career growth.
Therefore
, taking into account the present scenarios, it is highly demanding to have
driving
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license after 18 years of
age
.
However
, there is another side
also
which cannot be overlooked. There are several examples in
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society which proved that
age
is just a number. Some
people
worked hard but achieve success in
later
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part of their
life
due to maturity which grows with
age
.
Moreover
, several are examples of
people
which
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who
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were not
economicaly
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economically
well during their childhood or young
age
and acquired education and enhanced other important skills like driving after 30 or 40 years.
Therefore
considering all these examples, it is somewhere
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that
age
can cause no
hinderence
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hindrance
if the person
have
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the
will power
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willpower
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to acquire or learn something. In the nutshell, It can be said that
age
factor
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factors
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can affect
for
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certain
tasks
in
life
but it is not applicable to all situations in
life
.
People
have different choices and different levels of
will power
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willpower
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which can certainly break the myth of attaching
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of
task
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tasks
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with
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age
groups.
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