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discuss the process of manufacturing instant noodles

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The given chart illustrates the way instant noodles produce prosses. Overall, it is evident that there are 8 stages in the whole noodles-making process, beginning with bringing flour from the storage of silos and ending with labelling and sealing for customers.
To begin
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, the flour used to make the penne is brought from storage silos by heavy cars. Water and oil are added to the flour and
this
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 mixture is turned a dough in a mixer.
Next
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 before in order to divide the dough material flows onto rollers. End-of-process strips tuned the discs of penne for cooking with oil. Following, cooked discs are dried. In the subsequent stage, vegetables and spices have added to the discs , and after that cups are used for packing.
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, noodles are labelled and sealed for their consumers.
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