In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages.

In some

countries

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more families choose to educate their kids at

home

instead

of at

school

and

this

view has both positive and negative points. In

this

essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of homeschooling and give my opinion at the end.

First

of all, some people think that it is better for a child to study at

home

.

For example

, a child who is studying at house

recieves

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receives

more attention from his parents.

Furthermore

, they know their kid much better than the teacher at

school

.

Moreover

, kids feel comfortable at

home

, which helps them to succeed in their studies.

In addition

, there are

also

major disadvantages of receiving education only at

home

, which can have a negative effect on minors.

For instance

, when kids study at

school

they make many friends and talk to offspring of different personalities.

In particular

,

such

juveniles are exposed to more aspects of life than homeschooled children. Personally speaking, schooled children

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higher self-confidence than

home

-schooled

cildren

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children

. In conclusion,

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there is an argument that children are under the control of their parents at

home

.

This

does not mean that they should not go to

school

for a long time and not talk to their friend.

Therefore

, I am against

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being

teached

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only at

house

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. In my opinion, minors should

also

work with the team.