Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter - say what you like about the uniform - explain what you don’t you like about the uniform - suggest how the uniform can be improved

Dear Sir or Madam , Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. Who is your worker in your company?
First
,of foremost ,
l
am very proud to work with
this
company . Because it has all the necessary facilities for working . For
this
reason,
l
love my profession. Two days ago you introduced a special new uniform for all workers . I am mostly happy with the uniform .
That is
why is it so comfortable to wear and its style is attractive for all workers.
However
, there is one thing that
l
do not like .
That is
to say,
this
issue belongs to my health. I want to say that ,its colour is black and it terrifies me . Ever since
l
was a child ,
l
get scared when
l
see
this
colour . To my way of thinking , it is obvious that
l
can not concentrate.
Hence
,
l
request you to change the colour of the new uniform to light colours. I hope you understand my situation. I would appreciate it if you could help me with
this
matter. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Maxmasoliyeva Joziba.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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