Some people believe that television programs are of no real value for children. How far do you agree or disagree

In our modern era, a number of human being claim that

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broadcasting

are

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actually do not play a crucial role in

toddlers

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life.I partially support above mentioned statement because youngsters can watch

television

to have respectable

education

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content

as well as

leading enjoyment.

To begin

with,

television

shows are not suitable for young people for a variety of reasons.First and foremost

a

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substance abuse and offensive language may lead to some kind of negative effects.

Hence

, youth who are

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to drugs or alcohol waste time and

lost

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attention to their education

due to

watching a lot of unnecessary videos which

is promotes

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on

television

in particular

, they won't have

aptitude

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the aptitude

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to participate in social activities.

Additionally

, cos of their vulnerability, they are likely to acquire appropriate actions quickly

such

as roughness, aggression and derogatory language.

For instance

, sitcoms like Kingdom of Iron

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have transmitted a huge amount of

violence

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blogs to highlight the aforementioned points

this

kind of possible impact

also

includes

development

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the development

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of cognitive

disorder

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disorders

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like low

level

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brought on by exposure to

plethora

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a plethora

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of impolite materials.

Nevertheless

,telecasting as a youngster has some merits.These compiling

reason

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reasons

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may include

abundance

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an abundance

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of institutional projects that benefit youngsters significantly.

Furthermore

, there are top-notch comedy shows that are ideally equipped for kids.

Hence

, children who watch

these software

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may learn more

while

also

have

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a fine experience.

In

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illustration, they will enhance their observational skills if they observe

Discovery

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the Discovery

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channel. In conclusion, youngsters who are surrounded by violence and who are being watched

of

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television

will grow up with poor habits and medical conditions which is

also

will result in bettering inferential abilities and background understanding if they use it for academic and high-quality enjoyment objectives.