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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, the range of
sports
 facilities and
gyms
 increased dramatically, but
people
 are less fit than ever before. I believe exploring the cause of
this
 problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to help resolve it. The price of registration in
gyms
 and
sports
 centres has escalated rapidly.
Thus
, it could pretty much account for
people
 rather stay home and not use those
sports
 facilities. In my view,
governments
 should reduce the cost of registration for
people
 and
also
 can offer vouchers for a wide range of
sports
 centres.
Moreover
,
people
 indulge in eating processed food.
Therefore
,
governments
 should encourage
people
 to go on a diet and limit eating processed food.
People
 are restricted by busy schedules, so they do not have enough time to go to
gyms
. It can
also
 explain why
people
 are unwilling to go to
sports
 centres. The government should encourage
people
 to do some exercise by themselves on a regular basis and burn off some calories at home.
Also
,
governments
 should raise public awareness about the adverse of a sedentary lifestyle and its connection with increased health risks. To conclude, even though gym memberships are expensive now and
people
 are restricted by busy schedules contributes to
people
 becoming fatter and doing less exercise than before.
Governments
 can help remedy the situation. In my opinion, the government should reduce memberships cost and offer free vouchers for
gyms
 to increase wiling of
people
 to use
sports
 facilities and
also
 should raise public awareness about the positive effects of workouts and these are positive steps to resolve
this
 problem.
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