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All jobs can be done equally well by a man and a woman. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that both males and
females
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 can perform
similarly
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 in any kind of assigned
task
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. I disagree with
this
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 statement due to several reasons including the level of physical and mental ability possessed by them. The essay is intended to explain my view on
this
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 statement.
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, based on the nature of the job and the ability to be possessed by the
person
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 to complete the job successfully are depending on different factors including the physical and mental ability of the certain
person
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.
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, the level of achievement will be significantly different from
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 to
person
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 despite gender. For an instance, though the unloading of heavy goods is employed by both genders, it is scientifically proven that most male workers complete the
task
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 within a lesser time compared to
females
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 in the job.
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 implies that the effectiveness of the
work
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 deprived the demand of specific gender to engage .
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, the lady plays a significant role in the family as a mother,
therefore
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 some professionals are not allowed to be engaged due to its danger for the life during the pregnancy period. In
this
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 context,
females
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 may have restrictions to perform all the
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task
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 expecting similar outcomes compared to men in
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such
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work
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 in a firebridgete or investigation of crimes.
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, the men are completely free to engage in any of the
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task
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 despite their age and qualifications. In conclusion, though gender is not a factor to consider for performing a
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, there are some instances in which
females
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 can not engage in
work
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 expecting similar outcomes compared to men and,
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.

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