Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the 21st century when travelling to all parts of the world is accessible and international tourism takes place in one of the most profitable industries some part of citizens think that it creates tension rather than an understanding of

cultures

between people from various

countries

. There are different people and

accordingly

diverse opinions as indicated in the above statement.

First

of ,all travelling around the world and learning something new excellent way to grow up our minds and change to good side our outlook on life. I supported international travelling and want to visit many

countries

that I was not visited in the past, and if tourists from abroad came to Kazakhstan to travelling I will happy

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because

this

is a good opportunity to make good impressions and opinions about our

country

. Many people think that if different

cultures

encounter it will start discussions and arguments.

First

the

first

time it will be a dispute and different points of view on something but if both individuals will express an opinion it should find a point of agreement and mutual understanding between the two sides.

On the other hand

in many ways of communication between two

cultures

for example

Muslim and Christian end with misunderstanding and dispute. Because it is not normal in Muslim

countries

to wear short dresses and drink alcohol in public places, but in European ,

countries

it is normal lifestyle drink and takes drugs. When tourists from America or Australia visited

countries

that adhere to strict traditions, tourists do not understand it and will not want to visit a

second

-time Muslim

country

. And I think that it needs to respect the faith of visiting a

country

and before attendance finds out and read on the Internet what is permissible and what is not in a particular

country

. In ,conclusion because it needs to visit many

countries

in the world for work or by travelling every person should take only good and positive experiences from travel and from the

cultures

of visiting

country

and trying to get on well with the habitants at least until the end of the trip.