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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer want to became teacher, particularly in secondary school. what are the reason for this, and how could the proble, be solved.

#countries #teacher #school #reason #proble
The
recenr
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recent
 trend shows that the interest
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 being a teacher among
youngstars
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youngsters
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 is decreasing in numbers.
Although
 teaching is considered
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a noble profession, it is less paid and has limited opportunities in schools.
As a result
,
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 with universities, high schools are
legging
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lagging
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 behind. Here, the following paragraphs suggest some effective measures
such
 as
descent
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 salary and job security to motivate talents along with various factors that are responsible for the problem. To start with, growing inflation results in price
hike
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so that
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, it becomes difficult to survive with limited
earning
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earnings
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 where teaching is one of the fewest jobs which has
minimal
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a minimal
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 salary.
In addition
, the wave of consumerism leads people towards having maximum comfort goods like private vehicles,
fasionable
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fashionable
 clothes or a number of household
accessorie
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accessories
 which can hardly be purchased.
For instance
, when a teenager sets goals for his or her future, he or she makes comparisons among all career choices that the student has and eliminates teaching as it is not enough to cope with
the
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modernity. In
this
 context,
increase
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 in
the
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salary can attract the student to educate others by choosing
teaching
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to teach
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.
Likewise
, the profession is less facilitated in terms of research as school teachers are rarely involved in exploring knowledge which demotivates an individual who is fascinated about publishing
own
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their own
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 journals.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 common that they are losing their jobs
political
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for political
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 reasons.
Thus
, Government
hould
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should
allocate
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 funds to ensure research activities in schools and colleges as well as work for maintaining political neutrality. To conclude, there are multiple factors that curtail the rate of choosing teaching as
career
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a career
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. As teachers are the backbone of a nation, Government has to take various steps to spread the interest among people.
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