Time: 40 minutes Write at least 250 words In many countries, shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effects of this on the shoppers and local community. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In

this

modern era, the importance of

shops

is increasing by leaps and bounds because

shops

are now open 7 days

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the

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week and 24

hours

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a day. In my, opinion

this

ideology has some advantages and disadvantages. The position of

whole time

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open

shops

appears to be more rational. In

this

, essay we will address the positive and negative effects of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There

are

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myriad of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant fact is the population is fascinated by

shops

which are open long

hours

owing to individuals

have

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double shifts in organizations. Another pivotal aspect is

progressive

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overload of work is the main reason workers

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hard work in firms and

comes

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at home late

night

and

that

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times

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these kinds of

shops

play a vital role.

Furthermore

, in any emergency

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night

accidents, and,

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no more groceries, in that situation they provided

variety

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of products.

Additionally

, a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that people prefer shopping

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night

rathe

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than day due to heavy traffic jams.

Similarly

, most youngsters

is

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purchased items

in

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night

something of their studies.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

Although

, the most alarming one is criminals and theft are do most crimes

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night

.

Besides

, maybe, long

hours

work

condition

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cause

to

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cronical

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chronic

illness

such

as Cancer, tuberculosis, and, fever.

Moreover

, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that individuals who

opens

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stores for long

hours

are suffering from anxiety, depression and mental illness.

In addition

, they reduced their creativity skills. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion, that the benefits of

open

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stores for long

hours

are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.