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In the furture, buses, cars and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside will be passengers. Do you think tha advantages driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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after 10 or 20 years from now, all
cars
 and other transport systems will be automated, and the only person occupying the car will be the passengers, I think
this
 will lead to massive changes in our daily life, in
this
 essay will discuss both bane and boon for
this
 situation. * to commence with, there are several advantages of driverless
Cars
, the main one is the easy arrival to the destination while enjoying the ride,
hence
 the decision of taking a trip or going on vacation would be an easy one, while having plenty of time to do some work or deal with business Calls or emails,
moreover
,
this
 plays an important role in the life of individuals with different abilities, as they are no longer in need for someone driving them to their desire places,
for example
, if you know someone with special needs, and always relay others to help them driving
this
 can be a great solution,
furthermore
, it decreases the percentage accidents across the globe, which lead us to safe, convenient more enjoyable rides. *
On the other hand
, with all of the people using driverless
cars
 a lot of driver’s Lives will be at risk,
as a result
 of
this
 situation the percentage of unemployed drivers would increase,
in addition
, to the initial cost of the car and its maintenance can be out of reach to a lot of people,
moreover
, security issues, one of the potential cons about self-driving
cars
 is the possibility of hacking. * In Conclusion, self-driving Cans can be a game changer in our Life, and
besides
 the Financial and security issues, think, its advantages may weigh the disadvantages.
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