Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that it is more advantageous to take
part
in sports
which are played in teams
for instance
football, whereas other thinks taking part
in individual sports
is beneficial.I believe that playing in a team
game really shows your personality.
Nowadays, there are many sports
which are played individually and people are winning hearts.Although
playing solo doesn't give teammates exposure, it really defines how perfectionist one can be. For instance
, Neeraj Chopra is a great athlete at javelin.He won silver in the Olympics and now is recognised throughout the world. The recognition is just about him because he took part
in an individual sport.If it was a team
sport then
one team
as a whole would be recognised as a winner and not just a single person.
However
, sports
like cricket and football are played in teams
of 10-12 people. If the team
wins, the trophy is for the whole team
and the whole team
is recognised for their synchronisation and coordination of the team
.Although
there is always a captain in the team
who guides the teammates, his decisions are for the team
and not for himself/herself. While playing in a team
, it is not a single player's duty to win whereas all the player's duty is to make their team
win. For example
, Indian players playing as a team
benefit the country's pride rather than playing individually.Thus
, playing in teams
gives a player confidence.
In conclusion, I agree that taking part
in sports
which are played in teams
is beneficial as it displays your coordination as a team
and it boosts confidence.Submitted by rucha.khartadkar123 on
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