You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that I am the one of students who is currently staying in one of the college rooms.I have many problems with another student who is sharing the same place with me. Most nights he

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music loudly or he brings his friends into the room and makes a party with them.

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is fairly hard for me to concentrate on my work.

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noise, he

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does not clean the room

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, I have to arrange all things after them and lose many hours. I am usually a calm person and I would like to spend most of my time in peace. I would prefer to stay in a single room

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if you have any in college. I believe that it might be more beneficial for me and be focused on my work. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Zafer KALKAN

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
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