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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

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For many countries, international
tourism
 contributes a significant impact on the national economy.
However
, it
also
 causes many setbacks for their country.
This
 essay will discuss the biggest impact of
tourism
to
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on
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 the environmental situation as well as
giving
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 some solutions in order to keep our natural environment in balance. The foremost problem
cause
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 by international
tourism
 regards
to
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air
pollution
. Due to the high demand of using
transportation
, transport emissions and emissions
form
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from
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 energy increase disruptively, which
linked
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 to acid rain, global warming and photochemical
pollution
.
As a result
, poisonous chemicals from carbon dioxide (CO) emissions
related
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 to
transportation
,
which
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leads
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 to several acute diseases
such
 as lung cancers, high blood pressure,
or
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 even stroke.
Besides
,
noise
pollution
 is
also
 an obstacle.
Noise
pollution
 from
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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, cars, and buses, as well as recreational
vehicles
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 is a problem of modern life. The negative effects of
this
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 problems can be seen in the high rate of annoyance, stress, and even hearing loss for humans because of
noise
. It
also
 causes distress to wildlife, especially in sensitive areas. Air
pollution
 is inevitable, but we can join
our
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hand
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hands
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 in reducing the
pollution
 by using alternative
transportation
such
 as public transit, bikes, buses, or even on foot
instead
 of renting a car to get around. By choosing
less-polluting
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the less-polluting
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source
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sources
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 of
transportation
, we could contribute a huge impact
in
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on
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the balance
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balance
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balancing
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our
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of our
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 environment. In terms of
noise
pollution
,
national
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the national
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authority
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authorities
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 should adopt some punishments for organizations or individuals who have
noise
-making
behaviors
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behaviours
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.
For example
, in Ho Chi Minh
city
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, if making noises in residential areas or public places from 10 p.m. to 6 a.m., a warning or a fine of 100,000 to 300,000 VND for individuals; from 200,000 to 600 thousand VND for the violating organization. In conclusion, various actions can be taken to tackle
with
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the air and
noise
pollution
 from
tourism
. It is important that
government
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governments
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 from all countries will have more effective solutions to keep our environment in balance.
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