Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter - say what you like about the uniform - explain what you don’t you like about the uniform - suggest how the uniform can be improved

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to you to express my opinion by saying that our new uniforms and suggest some changes. Our company has recently received a new work uniform. I am mostly glad about
this
uniform.
However
, there is only one thing that I do not like. I am very happy with the colour of my new uniform and its size. Yet, the shoes that belong to me are very big for me. I respectfully that change my shoes to other ones if you can.
Moreover
, they are not the same as other people's shoes. I am not unhappy if you cannot change their colour. Because I love it. I will be very happy if you can solve my problem. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details please feel free to write to me. Yours faithfully, Dream girl Rashidova S.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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