the money spent by government on space programs would be better spent on vital public services such as school and hospitals. in what extend do you agree or disagree?
some people believe that it is better if governments spend more
money
on projects
related to the improvements of different aspects of vital public services
such
as schools or hospitals rather than allocate a budget to space
programs. I should say, even though public services
especially in the field of education and health care are really important matters, I totally disagree with this
opinion.
In ,fact space
projects
are not similar to what we see in science-fiction movies, but they play an important role in our daily lives. From launching and using satellites for broadcasting television programs , GPA , and internet connection ( such
as Starlink) to forecasting weather and collecting data to do estimates about serious disasters such
as storms or hurricanes, we rely on exploring and studying space
. In this
,regard governments must spend money
on space
programs as well as public services
and in fact from this
point of view space
projects
themselves can be considered as public services
too.
On the other hand
, there are some space
projects
which seem to have no public advantages for citizens. Designing, creating and sending expensive robots to space
to gather and bring samples of Mars or Moon soil and trying to grow plants on them, or just exploring the area and looking for any sign of possible water resources all are some of these projects
. While at the first
,sight it looks like a huge waste of money
to invest in this
kind of project, in my view they are a long-term investigation and in the near or far future
they will pay us back. In fact, the target of doing Add a comma
,future
this
kind of research and exploration is to find a way to be sure about a safe future for the next
generations, or even ourselves. Because it is possible that one day all the terrifying scenarios about the Earth being inhabited come true.
In ,conclusion governments should consider all these aspects and benefits of space
projects
and keep spending money
on them.Submitted by sp.piryaei on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite