Each year, the crime rate increase. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity.

The number of crimes across the world is increasing rapidly. The world is
also
witnessing a variety of crimes with increased technologies. On a serious note, criminals are opting to use technologies to attack the innocent. Reasons for these atrocities and corrective measures are to be discussed in detail. The prime reasons behind committing any crime, as described by the police force are momentary reactions to situations like greed, poverty, discrimination, personal desires etc, and many more.
For example
, financial scandals are prevailing in the present day in every country and the sole reason behind
this
is greed. With technological advancements like digital currency, the greedy are targeting innocent, uneducated and illiterate citizens. Adding to greed, social discrimination is
also
impacting the lawlessness being committed. The powerful are suppressing the weaker sections of society to stabilize their hold on the community. As patience
also
has a threshold and once the suppression exceeds the limits, the momentary reaction flushes out in the form of criminal activities. Examples of these kinds of social evils are prevailing even in developed countries in terms of racism. The responsibility to control the criminal attitude among the citizens lies with everyone including the government and schools. Conducting Yoga classes, encouraging meditation, and imparting devotional paths among individuals, can increase the levels of self-control and teaching equality is the key to reducing the psychic attitude. Universities and schools should
also
make it mandatory to teach good habits to children to guide them to walk away from becoming future criminals.
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