Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is controversial whether lawbreakers should be sent to prison or

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is better to choose the talented

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for good causes and make them productive.

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essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail. From my

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,

lawbreaker

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lawbreakers

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should serve the best for the vicious

crime

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they have committed, there should

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any violation of

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law.

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, isolating them

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the nation can be beneficial for the country’s safety. They should receive adequate punishments and realize their faults

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committing a

crime

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before they are released

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society.

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Otherwise

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those wrongdoers will commit more

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crime

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crimes

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as a habit. Some criminals even with rehabilitation

center

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centers

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and jail time turn towards

misconducts

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misconduct

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Nevertheless

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criminals with professional talents or who have the potential for improvement should be granted an opportunity to work under imprisonment, so when they are released, they have plenty of skills and expertise

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further

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they can start

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life

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lives

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again in a better way.

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example

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they can easily do handyman jobs like plumbing, construction ,

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and electrician

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electrician

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electricians

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, and rather

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to study and

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professionals like lawyers, doctors and many more, they can earn and make

living

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after having the knowledge for it. In

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conclusion, criminal should be trained under imprisonment for

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better future

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to not fall back

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another

crime

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and

other

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others

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should be disciplined

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. For the closure, equal rights should be presented for

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each type

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of

criminals

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criminal

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