Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The young generation has a vital role in future of the societies;

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, government authorities have provided a lot of training programs for them in

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past few years. Unpaid community services have been a subject of debate

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recent decades. Some people opine

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type of work should be compulsory for

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children

who are in high school levels. I side with

this

opinion but not strongly. In

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essay, I will explain

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details

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how far I agree or disagree with

this

issue. Some people believe that unpaid jobs should be

compulsory

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section of high school courses because juveniles are really fresh to do it at

this

age.

Also

, they do not need to be paid for their

works

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as they have

financial

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supported

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their families.

This

kind of job can prepare them for their future careers.

For example

,

children

can work in charities to help poor people

as well as

they can help the elderly

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their chores. In some cases, youth work for some companies and donate their incomes to the poor.

On the other hand

, if there is only one reason for me to disagree with

this

point of view, it is poverty. As some research

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,70% of families are underprivileged.

Hence

, most of the

children

need to be paid to support their families.

Thus

, they have to find a job with

salary

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since they are in high

schools

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. In a nutshell, unpaid jobs as a compulsory part of high school levels

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children

to be prepared for their future career, but most of the kids prefer to get paid

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their activities to aid their parents. I almost agree with the former opinion.