Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

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, there is a

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debit

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associated with governments should invest significant money

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railways rather than roads. In

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opinion, developing railways can help to resolve

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traffic

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and it can lead to individuals moving

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without any concern about their commute. It is my view that governments should invest more money in railways

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and it can lead to

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amount

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of traffics.

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, it can encourage

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in the

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area and commute

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train

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decreases

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the proportion of time

cummuters

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commuters

spend to reach their destination. In

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addition

, fares can be

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source of revenue for

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so they should invest in

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infarstructure

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infrastructure

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train

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and public

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transports

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trains are

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form of

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transport

so using

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train

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can help to protect

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environments

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, a group of

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claim that if

govrnments

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governments

spend more money to develop roads, It can lead to

reduce

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the number of

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that happened because of bad road

condition

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, It can decline

amount

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of traffic in the city.

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, I do not find the argument convincing as developing roads condition can not reduce

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size

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it causes to more

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use privet cars and it can lead to

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number of accidents too. In conclusion, I believe,

government

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should use a strategy to encourage

people

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other sorts of transport

such

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as trains and buses and

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aeroplane

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to protect

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and

also

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using

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train

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can reduce

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city

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainability
environmental footprint
efficiency
pollution
cost-effectiveness
economic development
accessibility
public transportation
congestion
air pollution
initial investment
maintenance
upgrades
rural
urban
last-mile connectivity

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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foregin language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advanantages of this outweight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant examples.