Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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context. The essay is
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to explain my view which
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the
satement
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emphasis basically on public communication and cultural
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adaptation
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country
.
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, the major
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by the migrant is
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difficulty
to share ideas with the local people.
As a result
, the foreigner may struggle in travelling by public transport,
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things or entering
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public places. As
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axample
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example
, if an international student wants to find a specific place in the university,
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english
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speaking friend or
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needed because less or no support he/ she can expect
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the road.
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, it is important to be prepared or be familiar with the
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before
you arriving
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specific
country
.
Secondly
, the practical
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to
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an alien
culture
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instance, the way that
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by
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Japanese
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different from other Asians, if tourists travel
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a
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, communicating,
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serving or they will embarrass at a public gathering.
This
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without proper planning
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new
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country
with a different
culture
. In conclusion, migrating to a new
country
with different
culture
and
language
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planning and practice of
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culture
and
language
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at
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the new land.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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