For the past seven days, you were late for work due to some unavoidable issues at home. Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several days. In your letter, explain why you were late for the last seven days apologise for the delay assure your manager that you will be on time from now on.

For the past few
days
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,days
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i
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I
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was late coming
for
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to
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work. In my
home
my
brother
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brother's
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marriage
before
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apply
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2days ago. We were working
in
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on
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their
marriage
preparation. In function our all the peoples were busy. And
i
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I
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m
coming late.
Me
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I
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and Sachin
was
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were
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going to
market
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the market
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for some groceries for
home
.
i
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I
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m
coming
was
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apply
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late. In
marriage
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,marriage
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most of
relatives
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our relatives
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were comes
in
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to
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our
home
. we were coming to
relatives
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relatives'
relative's
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homes and their
giving
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gave
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to
marriage
card
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cards
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. My friends
are comes
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come
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in
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to
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my
home
in
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to
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my
brother
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brother's
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marriage
and
talking
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talk
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to him. Nor I
m
coming to time at my work. I
m
very busy dear sir and taking care of my
relative
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relatives
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sisters etc.
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