fewer students are studying at school and university, favouring more computer based subject instead. Is this negative and positive development? what are reasons for this?

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subject
is getting more
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in school and universities
students
for studying rather than
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. But what is the most effective method for dealing with
this
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Some
students
believe that it is good for attaching with the technologies
besides
study I
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i
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will support my opinion with examples. first of all, taking modern tech knowledge.
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, study on computer-based subjects can give the idea of software usage, increase skill in typing, outer world ideas etc. If anyone takes it for
future
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career,
then
there is a better
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possibility
to earn
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amount of money. Another reason why
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believe computerized subjects are good is
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most
of
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the
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students
are likely to become
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inovative
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innovative
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people
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. Like, creativity can
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up all the time to their mind, making robotics
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products
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for
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being
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for smart
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rather than hard work.
on the other hand
, there is a common belief that
chosing
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choosing
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one
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particular
subject
instead
of
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others
by all
students
can be a massive problem for
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the next
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next generation
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life.
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,
students
won't get
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other knowledge
such
as
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economic
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economics
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, accounting, social history,
political
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etc.
As a result
, having
lack
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of knowledge may show the difficulties in corporate lives. In conclusion.
although
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is
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a common thought that people who chose
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subject
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subjects
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in
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life, he or
she
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will be a creative and
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innovative
person
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people
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. . Personally
i
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think it is good
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a technolofy
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technolofy
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technology
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if someone likes to give
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life in
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world
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