fewer students are studying at school and university, favouring more computer based subject instead. Is this negative and positive development? what are reasons for this?
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students
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will support my opinion with examples.
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, study on computer-based subjects can give the idea of software usage, increase skill in typing, outer world ideas etc. If anyone takes it for future
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possibility
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because
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students
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person
. Like, creativity can Fix the agreement mistake
people
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a human
being
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beings
working
rather than hard work.
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on the other hand
, there is a common belief that chosing
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choosing
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others
students
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political
etc. Replace the word
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As a result
, having lack
of knowledge may show the difficulties in corporate lives.
In conclusion. Correct article usage
a lack
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it
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the computer-based
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people
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