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What's the right age for parents to get their kids a cell phone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 modern era, smartphone usage has become a big concern for
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 of
children
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.There is no correct
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 when a child should possess a mobile phone but guardians can limit the excessive usage of the devices. To commence with, some
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 might give a thought that after schooling is the correct age
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 getting their
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's cell
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 as
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 them they get enough mature to distinguish between what is suitable or not suitable for them.
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,
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 may be in favour of thirty to forty per cent of pupils but not applicable to 90 %. Guardians can control their
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 limit of using smart devices so that they can have enough
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 to devote to their studies and sports.
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, during the pandemic, kids had no option of going out of the home.
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,
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 who were having their own
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 spend their most of
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 with smartphones
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 others who did not have
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, they were indulging in playing indoor games.
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,
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 must supervise their kids after providing them with cell
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 by restricting obscene sites and by applying two-step security on the app store so that, they are unable to download any application without the permission of their supervisor.
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, some
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 have been given access to Facebook kids' messengers as
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 they know their messengers are linked to their profiles and they can anytime give checks on their
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.
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 prevents their
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 from doing the work that should not be done.
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, there is no right
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 when
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 can have their own phone but
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 can put some restrictions on the utilisation of mobiles.
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