Some people believe that children should go to school at a very early age, but others think that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both the perspectives and express your opinion?
In today's world, education is seen as a tool for improving society by almost every person. But the question at what
age
children should enter school is usually a moot point. Some believe that the sooner boys and girls begin their education, the better. The rest of us think that children should be taught by their relatives in the early stages of their lives. In Use synonyms
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essay, I will analyze both points of view and conclude that, in my opinion, babies should be kept with their parents until they have acquired some basic rudiments of knowledge. To commence with, the school environment is highly competitive. Linking Words
For example
, issues of harassment and violence in playgrounds are constantly raised. Linking Words
This
could have been avoided if students had been taught tolerance and acceptance of different people beforehand. Linking Words
Therefore
, these values should be offered at home by their next of kin, as they are their parents and siblings from a very young Linking Words
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according to
experts, games are an important factor in learning. Linking Words
For instance
, children begin to speak and recognize shapes and Linking Words
colors
when they play with educational toys at an early Change the spelling
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age
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is an educational strategy that schools have forgotten and is difficult to implement in our time. Linking Words
Thus
, providing families with suitable toys is much better than separating their boys and girls from them. Linking Words
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, starting school at a very early Linking Words
age
is more like a way to get parents to get back to work as soon as possible. Something Use synonyms
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very far from the welfare of babies, as they must be protected by their families until they can resist lifLinking Words
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