we cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with oue own communities and countries. agree or disagree?

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In the modern era,
people
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are getting more self-concerned day by day. There are those who say that
people
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should only care about their own life,
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others believe that they should not.In my view, I disagree with the statement that
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cannot help others.
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, there are many reasons why
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believe that they should not worry about communities and countries.Perhaps the main reason why
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are in favour of
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is that most
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think that helping society or individuals, it's one kind of hassle. Nowadays
people
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try to avoid trouble or disturbance.
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, one of my uncles is a too much self-centred person. He never helps anyone
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he likes to spend his time with
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.Many years ago he gave a huge amount of loans to his colleague. But he cheated him and never back his money.
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, the incident became a hard-hearted person. That's why some
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stay away to support the public or doing any good things for countries.
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, there is
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a case for the idea that some individuals accept that caring about neighbours and society, is an essential part of our life. The main reason why
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think that it is an amazing effort is
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it builds up the strongest bond with each other.
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, in our country, several
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are homeless. Even they did not get any food for their living. If we support those
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, they will get shelter and gradually the country will be economically sufficient.
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, some
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should not be selfish for their country's population. In conclusion,it must be said that being unselfish, is a great blessing from God. If
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are enough aware to help others, our world will be a peaceful place.
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