Write a letter to a friend asking for his/her help to make a website. In your letter, you should: -describe what kind of website you want -say when you want the website to be done -explain how important the website is to you

#friend #website #-describe #-say #-explain

Hi Diego, I'm writing to you because I need your help to build a

website

for my company. I know that you

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the

rigth

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right

guy for

this

job and have all skill that I don't have. I tried

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to build

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build

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my first

website

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old

plattaform

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platform

online but I was very new in

this

world and the result was not

that

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I wish. I

star

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start

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work with photography and I

need

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build my

website

gallery

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the gallery

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of art, It's very important to show

the

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apply

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people, all

type

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photos

that I can do and include all my past works. Would be great if have a different menu, and the home page have big

photos

with my best

photos

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possible, I'd like

this

site ready for

publish

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in 3 months, I know it's a short time, but I have to find more clients and partners for

this

project,

however

, if you do

this

in less

then

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3 months, it will help me to make some ads on the social media.

This

project is very significant to me, I'm in one of the best moments of my career, have good clients, and

this

website

will help my company grow a lot, you can't imagine. It's my dream

have

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amazing

website

from my company and show my

photos

for

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the

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people who want

contract

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me for their projects. I'm looking forward to

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from you. Best wishes

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

238 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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