Living in a country where you have to speak a foriegn language can cause serious social as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It's true that speaking a
language
different from the mother
language
of the country you are in may cause many
problems
, bearing in mind you won'
t
be fluent in that
language
.So, I agree that
one
has to face so many social
problems
as well as
practical
problems
, in
this
essay I'll illustrate some points for you. being different from others
overall
could cause
problems
so
what's
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about being different and
also
being a foreigner who can'
t
speak the main
language
? In my point of view, it's hard to deal with that cuz we use our
language
on a daily use so
that
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which
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means that we use it in the supermarket, at work and even on social media platforms. so not being able to speak or write down that
language
will make it so difficult for you to communicate,
for
example
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if you wanna speak with your neighbour you won'
t
be able to understand him well which may cause a
lot
of misunderstanding and the bigger problem that in some languages there are words which are close to
be
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an accusing word so that may produce a big problem,as personal experience when I moved to Poland I didn'
t
know how to speak polish because there's no similarity between Polish and Arabic like when I went to the supermarket I wanted to reach the food
iel
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all
I tried asking the stuff or the people but as expected no answers no
one
understands what am I saying so that maybe
one
of the
problems
you may face in the social side. let's move on to the practical side,let's agree that we talk a
lot
and by talking here I mean our daily work.
consequently
, because
for example
if you are working in a telecommunications company you will meet a
lot
of people daily with different
problems
and you have to help them fix these issues because it's your job so how would you be able to do it if you even don'
t
understand what are they saying or what do they accurately mean you may do a
lot
of mistakes and that won'
t
help them, so they will call the manager and if he wasn'
t
kindhearted he'll directly fire you out and in a result of that you won'
t
have a job means no money leads to be poor and homeless or you'll go for stealing but if you were a hardworking person you will try hard to gain what you want with the hard way. In conclusion, living as a foreigner could have a
lot
of disadvantages so you must calculate all the probabilities and the
overall
stuff but highlight the
language
part
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because it's as hard as the financial
one
.
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