Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach on a basic English programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programme coordinator. In your letter • explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme • describe why you are a suitable candidate • say when you are available to teach.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention to the advertisement on the local council. As part of the programme for refugees, I would like to apply for

this

position as a volunteer English trainer. Let me start by saying that as I am a retiree worker and I would like to join

this

plan to teach basic English. In order to support the needs of people. As you announced two schedules I am more interested in doing it in the afternoon between 3 to 5 pm. I would like

therefore

to mention that I have twenty years of experience teaching modern languages, so I believe that I fit

this

role. Most of the time, I taught to children and teenagers. During that time, I developed some techniques and strategies to encourage them how to learn a new language.

Finally

, as I read on the announcement I will be able to start on the 15th of May. If you consider that my experience is convenient and

also

the techniques I would love to have a conversation next week. I hope you will take into

this

consideration and please do not hesitate to contact me to discuss

this

further

. Yours faithfully, Claudia Patino

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structure

Ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea to improve the structure.

content

Provide a little more detail on your teaching experience and strategies to strengthen your suitability.

structure

The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

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The writing tone is formal and suitable for the context.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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