Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school .What arre reasons and solution.

Firstly
, let's agree on
this
point not only
students
but
also
workers and every human being, in
this
essay I'
ll
dig throw some reasons and ways how to fix it. predictably,
students
are humans which can'
t
sleep
for example
6 hours and be active and healthy, I guess a lot of
students
don'
t
even sleep these 6 hours which leads that the brain mechanism won'
t
be
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so energetic. if you came to the reasons why is that I'
ll
try to give you a lot of reasons and
also
some of them are based on personal experiments. the problems that most of the
students
face is leaving the
homework
till the
last
hour before sleeping so if they are supposed to sleep at 10 for ex because of the undone
homework
they stay awake till 11 or 12 depends on how much and how hard is the
homework
that's the reason why I like doing my
homework
on
time
, but the problem that I face and some of other
students
/workers of cours is the caffien it's really a distructive weapon once you
drink
it you get used on it and it turns into addiction and as we all know that caffine is material most used for keeping us awake so once I
drink
a cup of
coffee
(which contains caffine) I turn as I just woke up sometimes I do some mistakes and forget about the
time
and
drink
it at night and from since I take the first sip I forget about sleeping even if i was dead sleeping before, that effects my concentration levels because I do the same final point of the first problem i mentioned I sleep too late but not because of the
homework
because of the
coffee
, but if u asked me if I'm fine with that or not? I'
ll
totally go for yes,I'm totally fine because when I
drink
it gives me power so I will be able to finish more studies or anything else, but not having enough sleep could be a serious reason for less concentration.
moreover
, less concentration may be a total miss but there are some ways to help yourself go throw that,the most important one is if you wanna
drink
coffee
and you're addicted to it you can just
drink
it in the morning times especially at breakfast with the tasty dish of egg fantastic.
however
, solutions for the kids or the teenagers between 14-17 which supposed that they don'
t
drink
coffee
the solution comes for when they get their
homework
and after arriving home they should change their clothes, eat and start directly to finish their
homework
, I call that
time
management for your information it's really helpful it fulfils the quote of "work smart not hard" so if you managed
doing
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your
homework
and housework in an arranged
time
and following a
time
management technique it would be awesome. In conclusion, we're the ones who are following the rules of life manage your
time
well and you'
ll
feel that
time
ain'
t
passing which is something good more
time
more
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stuff to finish, take care of doing a good
time
management table and the most important is to follow it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Concentration
  • Digital distractions
  • Intrinsic motivation
  • Curriculum
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Dietary habits
  • Stress
  • Conducive learning environment
  • Engagement
  • Counseling
  • Academic focus
  • Resources
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