Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join: – Explain about the trip – Explain why your brother couldn’t make it – Giving details about the trip.

Hello Navan, I hope you are doing well!
I’ve
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I have
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an exciting offer for you and I’m sure you will love it and thank me later. Actually,
me
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I
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and my brother planned a trip to
Blue
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the Blue
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Mountains
last
week for
coming
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the coming
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weekend with my other 5 friends. We already booked a cottage for a week and rented a
seven seater
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car as well to commute from
toronto
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to there. We were very excited to spend our quality time in the beauty of the mountains. Unfortunately, my brother could not make it
on
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this
coming weekend. Actually, he got an interview call from his dream company which collapsed with our
vocation
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vacation
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time and he
don’t
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want to lose
this
golden opportunity. To talk about the trip, we are starting it from Toronto at 5:00 am on coming Saturday and will be back by
next
Sunday evening. We planned to do
ice-skating
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and trekking nearby
our
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accommodation that we booked for the entire week. I’ll be happy if you can join us and have some leisure time with us. I’m sure you will not miss
this
chance. I’m waiting for your response. Write back soon! With love, Sandy
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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