Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join: – Explain about the trip – Explain why your brother couldn’t make it – Giving details about the trip.

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Hello Navan, I hope you are doing well!

I’ve

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I have

I have got

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an exciting offer for you and I’m sure you will love it and thank me later. Actually,

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and my brother planned a trip to

Blue

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Mountains

last

week for

coming

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the coming

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weekend with my other 5 friends. We already booked a cottage for a week and rented a

seven seater

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car as well to commute from

toronto

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to there. We were very excited to spend our quality time in the beauty of the mountains. Unfortunately, my brother could not make it

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this

coming weekend. Actually, he got an interview call from his dream company which collapsed with our

vocation

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vacation

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time and he

don’t

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want to lose

this

golden opportunity. To talk about the trip, we are starting it from Toronto at 5:00 am on coming Saturday and will be back by

Sunday evening. We planned to do

ice-skating

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and trekking nearby

our

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accommodation that we booked for the entire week. I’ll be happy if you can join us and have some leisure time with us. I’m sure you will not miss

this

chance. I’m waiting for your response. Write back soon! With love, Sandy

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

195 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join: – Explain about the trip – Explain why your brother couldn’t make it – Giving details about the trip.

The Closing

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