In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

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Nowadays
people
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are living longer. In fact, we can notice that there are more old
people
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than in the past.
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several reasons,
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as a better quality of
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with more medicine for several illnesses, a big variety of food and a good geo-politic situation. To commence with, we must consider that science is improving every day, so now we can live easier than in the past years. The advent of technology helps us in the everyday
life
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, so finding a solution for a headache is no anymore a big deal.
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, today, fortunately, is not difficult to try to heal some specific kinds of diseases,
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as smallpox and AIDS. In fact, face the first one, was discovered the vaccine,
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for the
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one, even if we are not able to have a final solution to stop the illness forever, we know what to do, and
people
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can live a normal
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.
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, it is important to notice that the offer and the quality of food are better. We can go to every market in our cities
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and find always what we want. It is common to have fresh fruits and products that don’t belong to the season in which we are. So, in
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way
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we can give our bodies the substances that it needs. In conclusion, if we
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assume vitamin D or C, it is not complicated to go around to a supermarket and find a lot of products with that.
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, there is since 1945 a good geo-political situation. In fact, there
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no more big wars
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as the one that we had in the past, and
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enhances the
life
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of everyone because it allows economic prosperity. Industries are fastly growing, and it allows us to have always what we need.
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, fewer
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nowadays must pay attention to how they use shampoo or other products like that because we can always buy them. In conclusion, we can say that there could be other reasons that allow living longer, but probably these are the most important, and
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is shown by the several proves that I stated in the essay.
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