should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

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high tech or should

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be adapted to us? Is

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making us

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weaker or more clever? Some would argue that

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accustom to

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others think

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us more intelligent

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. I believe that

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accommodate

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because it will help us to acquire more knowledge;

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is not making us

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on people's choices. On the one

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many

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believe that

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needs to accommodate

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individuals

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need to evolve.

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, many citizens look for having a more comfortable life and demand

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help them to have it.

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, many of them are willing to buy robots to help with home shores.

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, in many American fiction movies

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can see how

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might take over

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' lives, and

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the

movie, people rely totally on gadgets.

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way and

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humanity adapt to

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because

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might lose control of their lives.

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is not making citizens weaker because

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will depend on people's

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and how they become

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to it.

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, many young adults

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to expand

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knowledge and avoid buying books or notebooks.

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students are taking classes online, so it helps to not spend money on transportation. To explain

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, In The United States, after the Covi-19 most of the classes are taught online to prevent the spread of the disease and

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stronger. I believe

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is a smart way to

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to take the most

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the

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although

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many

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believe that

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needs to accommodate

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technology

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to have a comfortable

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away the individual's control to avoid being addicted to it. I believe

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can

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limitations to improve

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individuals

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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challenges
technological advancements
dependency
integration
efficiency
productivity
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should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

In the future all cars, buses, and train will be driverless. The only people travelling inside the vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages?

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everuthing they want online without paying. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this satement.