should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

Should

individuals

accommodate

to

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high tech or should

technology

be adapted to us? Is

technology

making us

intellectual

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weaker or more clever? Some would argue that

humans

shoul

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should

accustom to

computers

,

while

others think

technology

make

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us more intelligent

humans

. I believe that

technology

should

accomodate

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accommodate

to

humans

because it will help us to acquire more knowledge;

however

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technology

is not making us

wearker

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weaker

because

this

depend

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on people's choices. On the one

hand

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many

individuals

believe that

society

needs to accommodate

to

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high tech because

the

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individuals

need to evolve.

Firslty

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Firstly

First

, many citizens look for having a more comfortable life and demand

technology

help them to have it.

Also

, many of them are willing to buy robots to help with home shores.

For instance

, in many American fiction movies

individuals

can see how

computers

might take over

humans

' lives, and

at the end

of

tghe

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the

movie, people rely totally on gadgets.

However

, I believe

this

should not be

this

way and

society

should not let

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humanity adapt to

technology

because

humans

might lose control of their lives.

On the other

hand

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technology

is not making citizens weaker because

this

will depend on people's

use

and how they become

accustom

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to it.

Moreover

, many young adults

use

this

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this computer

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computers

to expand

thie

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their

knowledge and avoid buying books or notebooks.

Also

,

now a days

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most

of

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the

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students are taking classes online, so it helps to not spend money on transportation. To explain

further

, In The United States, after the Covi-19 most of the classes are taught online to prevent the spread of the disease and

this

make

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society

stronger. I believe

this

is a smart way to

use

computers

to take the most

of

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out of

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the

technology

.

To conclude

,

although

many

individuals

believe that

society

needs to accommodate

to

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technology

to have a comfortable

lives

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, one must pay attention to not

give

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away the individual's control to avoid being addicted to it. I believe

society

can

use

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a computer

the computer

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computer

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computers

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with

restrict

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limitations to improve

indidviduals'

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individuals

individual's

knowledge.