Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #attention

It is argued by people that advertising companies catch our attention successfully to sell their products through the advertisement

while

others feel we ignore them as they are popular nowadays.

This

essay

aim

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to discuss both views.

Firstly

,with the development of technology,companies manufacture different products constantly. Recently,there are

variety

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of items to fulfil one purpose in the market.To market them

manufactures

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advertise their products and they always use famous and stunning characters as role models.

For instance

,in

India

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most of the

advertisements

are covered by Bollywood actors.

As a result

,many people tend to buy those things regardless of any matter. Based on

this

phenomenon it can be said that

advertisements

persuade us to purchase items.

On the other hand

,as some marketing strategies ate commonly known by customers,they tend to neglect them automatically. Because

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television when people are watching our favourite drama or film

advertisements

become terrible

distractor

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For example

,they can see Coca-Cola

add

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ads

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multiple times

while

watching

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a bollywood

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bollywood

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Bollywood

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movie

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movies

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Finally

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we feel bored and try to neglect that product without

further

thinking. In conclusion,

although

advertisements

play

major

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role in marketing,many customers neglect them as distractors

while

others tend to buy things.

According to

my opinion,

advertisements

should be controlled by local authorities to prevent unnecessary purchasing.And

also

consumers must have to watch them with their conscious

mind

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

213 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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attract
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impact
consumerism
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