Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by people that advertising companies catch our attention successfully to sell their products through the advertisement
while
others feel we ignore them as they are popular nowadays.This
essay aim
to discuss both views.
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aims
Firstly
,with the development of technology,companies manufacture different products constantly. Recently,there are variety
of items to fulfil one purpose in the market.To market them Add an article
a variety
manufactures
advertise their products and they always use famous and stunning characters as role models.Correct your spelling
manufacturers
For instance
,in India
most of the Add a comma
,India
advertisements
are covered by Bollywood actors.As a result
,many people tend to buy those things regardless of any matter. Based on this
phenomenon it can be said that advertisements
persuade us to purchase items.
On the other hand
,as some marketing strategies ate commonly known by customers,they tend to neglect them automatically. Because in
television when people are watching our favourite drama or film Change preposition
on
advertisements
become terrible distractor
.Fix the agreement mistake
distractors
For example
,they can see Coca-Cola add
multiple times Correct your spelling
ads
while
watching Correct article usage
a bollywood
bollywood
Change the capitalization
Bollywood
a Bollywood
movie
. Fix the agreement mistake
movies
Finally
we feel bored and try to neglect that product without Add a comma
,Finally
further
thinking.
In conclusion, although
advertisements
play major
role in marketing,many customers neglect them as distractors Add an article
a major
while
others tend to buy things.According to
my opinion,advertisements
should be controlled by local authorities to prevent unnecessary purchasing.And also
consumers must have to watch them with their conscious mind
.Fix the agreement mistake
minds
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