Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by people that advertising companies catch our attention successfully to sell their products through the advertisement
while
others feel we ignore them as they are popular nowadays.
This
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to discuss both views.
Firstly
,with the development of technology,companies manufacture different products constantly. Recently,there are
variety
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of items to fulfil one purpose in the market.To market them
manufactures
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advertise their products and they always use famous and stunning characters as role models.
For instance
,in
India
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most of the
advertisements
are covered by Bollywood actors.
As a result
,many people tend to buy those things regardless of any matter. Based on
this
phenomenon it can be said that
advertisements
persuade us to purchase items.
On the other hand
,as some marketing strategies ate commonly known by customers,they tend to neglect them automatically. Because
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television when people are watching our favourite drama or film
advertisements
become terrible
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.
For example
,they can see Coca-Cola
add
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multiple times
while
watching
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bollywood
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Bollywood
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movie
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movies
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.
Finally
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we feel bored and try to neglect that product without
further
thinking. In conclusion,
although
advertisements
play
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role in marketing,many customers neglect them as distractors
while
others tend to buy things.
According to
my opinion,
advertisements
should be controlled by local authorities to prevent unnecessary purchasing.And
also
consumers must have to watch them with their conscious
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.
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