Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include • Why you enjoyed the trip • What you are doing now • An invitation to visit you now
Dear Johnny,
How are you? I hope you have had a good rest after the long journey
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I am so glad that we travelled together to Spain. It was one of my best trips yet. I really enjoyed eating the authentic foods, Linking Words
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loved the architecture of the city. Those ornaments on the facade of the buildings were so sophisticated and beautiful!
Anyway, those fun times have passed now. I am currently back in Melbourne working. It is Linking Words
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a boring day-to-day activity. Especially when my boss keeps yelling at me for not performing to his ridiculous standards, and my junior cannot stop listening to his loud music without headphones! I really wish I Linking Words
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There is a long weekend coming up next week. Would you like to come and visit me? We can plan a small trip to explore the Western Melbourne area. I hope you are free during that week. If you are not, let me know your availability.
Take care for now and write back soon.
Kind Regards,
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Submitted by sam_danielo on
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task response
Ensure that the content is more focused on the trip and your current activities to better address the task.
coherence and cohesion
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter, and consider revising the transition from talking about the trip to your current activities.