Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior. To what ecpend do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern
society
,
media
directly use violent
contect
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contact
content
to get viewership.
This
cause
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causes
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violent
behavior
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behaviour
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in
the
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society
. Part of the
poplutation
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population
agree
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agrees
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with
above
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point,
while
otheres
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others
disagree. My point is, there is an impact on violent
media
. In
this
essay, I'll be discussing my opinion.
Firstly
, there is no
media
ethics in
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the current
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media
industry.
As for
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an
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example, a boy killed her girlfriend in a park recently in Sri Lanka.
This
was the main headline of all
media
platforms. they reported
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the insident
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insident
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incident
in detail. How he
prepraed
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prepared
and how he purchased a knife and how he killed her. They didn't use any sort of filters to
blure
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blur
the backgrounds.
This
type
news
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of news
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directly
cause
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causes
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violent
behaviors
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behaviours
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of
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in
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the
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society
.
secondly
, social
media
is the other platform. People get bullied and get depressed
in
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on
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facebook
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Facebook
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,
whatsapp
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and
instagram
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Instagram
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. Especially, women and children get
harrased
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harassed
. For
an
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example,some pretty girls love to share
there
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sexy
pictureS
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pictures
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. But
media
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the media
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use these to insult them and they
lable
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label
them as sluts and they spread hate speech about them,
this
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which
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cause
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causes
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them to get
suside
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outside
subside
. In conclusion, violent
media
influence
in
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apply
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violent
behavior
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behaviour
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.
According to
my point of view
media
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should have their own
resposibility
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responsibility
to
make
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a better
society
.
Therefore
they need to report the news
with
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in
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much
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a much
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more appropriate manner.
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