some people like to spend their liesure time after work with their coworkers while others like to keep their private life separate from work. Discuss both sides.
it has been
argud
that Correct your spelling
argued
enterinment
Correct your spelling
entertainment
times
should Fix the agreement mistake
time
be spend
with Change the verb form
be spent
be spending
work
friends whereas
other believe it should be spend
with family and friends who is out of Change the verb form
be spent
be spending
business
field. Add an article
the business
moreover
,in this
essay
Add a comma
,essay
i
will discuss both Change the capitalization
I
side
and give Change to a plural noun
sides
reasions
.
Correct your spelling
reasons
to begin
, spending funtime
with coworkers could be nice ,and it could be Correct your spelling
fun time
Funtime
beneficeal
for a future carer for several reasons.Correct your spelling
beneficial
firstly
, tooking
about business even Correct your spelling
looking
out side
Correct your spelling
outside
work
my
bring new ideas Correct your spelling
may
esspisely
when we have fun because the brain is motivated.Correct your spelling
supinely
secondly
, it increase
the relationships between coworkers who Change the verb form
increases
work
together in a compony
or any other business.Correct your spelling
company
for example
, if emplyees
form IT Correct your spelling
employees
compony
go to Correct your spelling
company
football
game ,it may increase connections between them .and Add an article
a football
the football
also
, give them new ideas such
as invent a mobile app where it's porpesess
to improve football game by Correct your spelling
purposes
processes
giveing
Correct your spelling
giving
paln
for the team to play with.
Correct your spelling
plan
however
, others fell
that Correct your spelling
feel
work
and entertainment should be seberated
. Correct your spelling
separated
thay
think so Correct your spelling
They
as a result
to keep the work
more professional and dose
not Correct your spelling
does
enterfer
with Correct your spelling
interfere
crousieal
Correct your spelling
crucial
dissestion
.Correct your spelling
dissection
fot
instant, if the Correct your spelling
for
manger
of a Correct your spelling
manager
compony
need to Correct your spelling
company
fier
one of his Correct your spelling
fire
emplyee
or to Correct your spelling
employee
employees
promot
one .suionce like Correct your spelling
promote
this
,which is crucial for Correct article usage
a compony
compony
success, can be Correct your spelling
company
easely
Correct your spelling
easily
effected
by emotions.
Correct your spelling
affected
to conclude
, it is true having fun with coworker
Fix the agreement mistake
coworkers
my
be fun and Change the pronoun
I
god
for Correct your spelling
good
nwe
Correct your spelling
new
we
work
ideaes
,but it Correct your spelling
ideas
also
may effect
Correct your spelling
affect
other aspect
Change the wording
another aspect
other aspects
in
Change preposition
of
busniess
that could be more Correct your spelling
business
importants
.Correct your spelling
important
Submitted by mohmmadloaa95 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!