Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, with the advancement of science and Technology ,new innovations apply to increase the proficiency of
the
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waste
management as domestic
waste
is a huge problem. But there
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no sufficient activities going on to
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the
waste
materials. In
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I suppose that governments
as well as
every
individuals
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also
take part to increase the rules and regulations to develop recycling. At present most
of
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countries
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try to use
the
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domestic
wastage
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to produce energy
while
spreading the reusing concept.
However
, most
of
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governments
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the governments
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fail to manage
this
garbage which
are
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coming from homes. Though authorities take many decisions, they never continue actually.
For instance
, in Sri Lanka, though there are solid
waste
management units under the government in different areas, we can see garbage dumps near to main cities. A community member not only the government but
also
everyone
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equal responsibility to control it.
In contrast
,
policy-makers
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must pay more attention
for
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this
matter,
otherwise
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it becomes a disaster. They can make new taxes, rules and regulations to handle
this
as laws can make a huge effect
in
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a
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positive way for recycling. For
an
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example, Dubai is one of the
country
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that
maintain
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strict conditions
who
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throw garbage unproper way and always
monitering
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monitoring
it by using new technical devices. They know fear
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breaking rules and the huge taxation, will make discipline to manage
recycled
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process successfully.
To sum up
, though people throw their
fingures
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fingers
figures
towards the ruler, they
also
must give their support to
fulfill
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the
waste
management,
otherwise
whole
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system of recycling will be collapsed.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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