Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in therir adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour.
In today's perpetually transforming epoch ,
due to
globalisation ,migration has become famous around the globe .As a consequence
, at present ,an increasing number of masses are migrating to other nations compared to the past. In order to become an integrated part of the community in the adopted countries it is opined by a few people
that immigrants should abandon their old ways and accept local customs
and codes for their behaviour. I agree to a huge extent with the above notion and , I have given my reasons along with
suitable justifications for the impending subdivisions.
Commencing with the agreement side ,first and foremost , if people
adopt a new culture , they will not face cultural shock .Additionally
, presently , the majority of people
are going abroad for academic purposes and for getting an education in foreign languages.so , people
have to learn foreign languages , customs
and traditions . Owing to this
they can not only accomplish their desired goals but also
can not face a language barrier. As a result
, they will fight any emergency situation in the future.
Yet another reason is now the world has become a global Village .To elaborate , nowadays a vast number of people
are exchanging their art
, tradition , attire customs
,food , folk dance and whatnot. so , folk have to learn how to survive with different cultures because it has been seen that multi-culture people
have a great ability to think and get good job opportunities compared to monoculture people
. Furthermore
, a number of people
are going abroad for getting good employment , so , if they do not learn it , they will not be respected by other people
.
Taking into account the disagreement side , if people
adopt a new civilization , it would have detrimental effects on their own culture. The top of it , the majority of families have a great influence on different cultures so they will lose their art
. as a result
, cultural - art
and customs
which are learnt by us by our ancestors, are not passed on to the next
generation and they will not understand the value of their own culture. for example
, a person who belongs to Rajasthan which locates in India has great 'snack archer art
.if he/she lost it , they cannot give this
art
to the next
generation.
To conclude
.nowadays the world has become a global Village so if people
want to become a respected remember of society,they should learn about other cultures as well as
by learning this
, they will not face a cultural shock but it would lead to cultural- loss.Submitted by vaisuprajapati1997 on
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