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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in therir adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour.

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In today's perpetually transforming epoch ,
due to
 globalisation ,migration has become famous around the globe .
As a consequence
 , at present ,an increasing number of masses are migrating to other nations compared to the past. In order to become an integrated part of the community in the adopted countries it is opined by a few
people
 that immigrants should abandon their old ways and accept local
customs
 and codes for their behaviour. I agree to a huge extent with the above notion and , I have given my reasons
along with
 suitable justifications for the impending subdivisions. Commencing with the agreement side ,first and foremost , if
people
 adopt a new culture , they will not face cultural shock .
Additionally
 , presently , the majority of
people
 are going abroad for academic purposes and for getting an education in foreign languages.so ,
people
 have to learn foreign languages ,
customs
 and traditions . Owing to
this
 they can not only accomplish their desired goals but
also
 can not face a language barrier.
As a result
 , they will fight any emergency situation in the future. Yet another reason is now the world has become a global Village .To elaborate , nowadays a vast number of
people
 are exchanging their
art
 , tradition , attire
customs
 ,food , folk dance and whatnot. so , folk have to learn how to survive with different cultures because it has been seen that multi-culture
people
 have a great ability to think and get good job opportunities compared to monoculture
people
.
Furthermore
 , a number of
people
 are going abroad for getting good employment , so , if they do not learn it , they will not be respected by other
people
. Taking into account the disagreement side , if
people
 adopt a new civilization , it would have detrimental effects on their own culture. The top of it , the majority of families have a great influence on different cultures so they will lose their
art
.
as a result
 , cultural -
art
 and
customs
 which are learnt by us by our ancestors, are not passed on to the
next
 generation and they will not understand the value of their own culture.
for example
, a person who belongs to Rajasthan which locates in India has great 'snack archer
art
.if he/she lost it , they cannot give
this
art
 to the
next
 generation.
To conclude
 .nowadays the world has become a global Village so if
people
 want to become a respected remember of society,they should learn about other cultures
as well as
 by learning
this
, they will not face a cultural shock but it would lead to cultural- loss.
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