Some people think that environment problems should be solved on global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Ecological problems is been increasing rapidly throughout the
global
and it needs to be handled with appropriate steps. Some people believe that it should be addressed globally Replace the word
globe
while
others Linking Words
contradicts
the statement saying it needs to look Change the verb form
contradict
as
a national Change preposition
like
issue
. In my Use synonyms
opinion
I believe addressing the ecological problems nationally would be much more progressive than Add a comma
,opinion
take
Change the verb form
taking
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
as
globally.
Change preposition
apply
Firstly
handling the ecological concerns nationally would be more appropriate because as a nation it will be amendable for the things related to these Linking Words
issues
like sanctioning Use synonyms
establishment
of industrial factories. Which are the major source of causing these Add an article
the establishment
issues
by not following the government rules and regulations related to the environment. Use synonyms
In addition
to these, pollutions caused by the numerous automobile usage in Linking Words
the
urban areas are Correct article usage
apply
also
one of the reasons for the cause. As a solution governance should Linking Words
issue
strict policies like each family should uphold only two Use synonyms
automobile
Change to a plural noun
automobiles
instead
of having each for a family member and Linking Words
also
separate monitoring team and new threshold values Linking Words
has
to be drawn for the wastages produced by the industries. In Change the verb form
have
this
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way
Add a comma
,way
nation
would be having more control over the ecological causes.
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
Secondly
controlling the Linking Words
issues
of Use synonyms
environment
globally is Correct article usage
the environment
also
possible but that would be more challenging Linking Words
compare
to the nationwide. Change the form of the verb
compared
Like monitoring
Change preposition
Monitoring
causes
of these Correct article usage
the causes
issues
and Use synonyms
brining
awareness Correct your spelling
bringing
in
Change preposition
to
the
society by a single authority would be difficult. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
gathering information that Linking Words
causing
these Wrong verb form
causes
Use synonyms
issue
from each nation will be missing Fix the agreement mistake
issues
few
of the important details Correct article usage
a few
this
is Linking Words
due to
the lack of local control over the particular nations. And finding the resolutions for Linking Words
these
Change the determiner
this issue
these issues
issue
which lacks Use synonyms
few
information would make Correct quantifier usage
apply
troublesome
Correct pronoun usage
it troublesome
in
succeeding Change preposition
to
objectives
of resolving Correct article usage
the objectives
the
ecological problems.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
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although
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environment
Replace the word
environmental
issues
can be handled globally, it is still not an appropriate idea. So, in my Use synonyms
opinion
it would much better to be handled Add a comma
,opinion
as
a nationwide Correct pronoun usage
it as
issue
.Use synonyms
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