Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper.

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Dear Editor, I am writing in regard to the advertisement you posted in your newspaper about rewarding people who have contributed to the

community

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. I would like to nominate Mrs. Rachel Matt who

work

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as a teacher at N.V.M School, Bangalore. She served a lot for the school and

community

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including taking

initiative

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the initiative

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on helping

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to help

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students

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apply

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meet their needs,

encouraged

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encouraging

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students to attend school who dropped out and

she is

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being

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a visionary leader who addressed the various

community

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needs. She is characterized

with

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unique qualities of being human, integrity and

kind

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a kind

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nature. She

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joined

with

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apply

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community

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club and took

initiative

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the initiative

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in providing

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to provide

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housing facilities for people who cannot afford it. We have a lot to learn from a personality like her and I believe we have to show our gratitude in some ways and it seemed

this

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opportunity is the best way to show our respect for her contributions. By looking at her dedication and care towards the

community

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, I would like to recommend her name for

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the “Wonder

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Woman Award”. The monetary benefit from the

community

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will help her to extend the work and more people can come together and join the hands to serve the

community

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in a better way. Thank you for giving your attention and hope I will receive the news from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ram Nath

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coherence cohesion

The letter could have a clearer paragraph structure. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or aspect of Mrs. Matt's contributions.

task achievement

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task achievement

The letter provides a complete and suitable response addressing all aspects of the task. It clearly nominates Mrs. Rachel Matt and explains her contributions to the community effectively.

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The tone of the letter is appropriately formal and respectful for the context.

coherence cohesion

The letter opens with a clear greeting and ends with a polite closing, maintaining a formal structure.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

224 words

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