The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter, say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party explain why you won’t be able to attend the party give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Aunty and Uncle, I'

so glad, that you invited me

for

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Chris's 18th birthday party. Chris is a

kind hearted

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boy who

love

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little things,

such

as surprise parties, gifts, small

talks

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and many more. He will surely get surprised

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because he will never think that you will throw a

gaththering

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gathering

for his

specail

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special

day

. I'

sure

this

will be a memorable

day

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his life. But I'

sorry, I will not be able to make it. Because I have an exam to attend

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the same

day

. I Spoke to the examination department to get an

extention

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extension

. But it didn't work as I'

too late to submit the request. Anyway, I'll

definitly

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definitely

come to your place and take him out

for

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spend the

day

. There is a boutique near my home, which is

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extremely beautiful, calm and quiet place to relax. Chris will love to spend

the

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time there. I'

planing

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planning

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to book the place

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week.

Moreover

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this

will be my birthday gift for him.

Therefore

kindly excuse me for

this

time. Hope you will forgive me for not coming. Best regards Sanka Viraj

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

188 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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