Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this type of shopping outweigh the disadvantages?

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,

people

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have got more confident and familiar with going shopping on the

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in a large portion of the world, but

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approach has certain drawbacks too.

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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of buying things on the

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and provide

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conclusion. The two main advantages of the

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industry are the quick delivery of any kind of product and the increase in competition and lowering of prices.

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,

people

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spend money on a wide range of services and goods, including hotels, books,

furniture

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and furniture

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and doing

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thorough

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the

internet

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guarantees in many cases to receive the item immediately or at most the day after the transaction.

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, the most famous

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vendor, Amazon, can deliver a book in a day.

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, the

internet

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market is extremely wide and accessible to loads of

people

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around the world and

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affects and increases the competition

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a larger demand. It results in lowering

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prices.

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, buying things on the

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also

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has some major disadvantages like purchases made from vendors less reliable and

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in

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transactions. Whenever someone loads the search of a service or a good on the

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, on the thousands of vendor websites, it should be paid attention to and be made an accent on the

buyers

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buyer's

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feedbacks in order to have a more clear understanding of the supplier reliability. What’s more, some vendors do not provide options

to

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for

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the

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apply

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payment

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through

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credit card and

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lack of alternatives could, sometimes, lead

people

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to

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frauds

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or uncomfortable situations like

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. As far as I am concerned, a careful, precise and proper approach to the

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in general

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can eliminate these advantages.

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,

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buying things on the

internet

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has certain disadvantages like

vendor

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vendors

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less

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being less

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reliable and

frauds

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fraud

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in

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payment

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a payment

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transaction

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transactions

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, it has an extremely positive impact on the market competition and provides lower prices. I believe that these benefits of

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internet

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platforms outweigh

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their

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drawbacks.