Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should encourage to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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. Some individuals tend to argue that we all should live in the CBD to solve Fix the agreement mistake
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, the main obvious reason is that the population all over the world has increased in number. Linking Words
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it becomes difficult to find a place to live in cities. Linking Words
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, stunning new buildings are built for families who want their hometown near every facility. Linking Words
For instance
in Annemasse, a huge city in France, there is one apartment for ten tenants meaning that a real estate agent must inform nine people that they will not be chosen for the apartment.
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, pollution is an enormous danger to our planet, Linking Words
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nature will disappear quickly if nothing is done, even if cars are Linking Words
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problematic for the environment. It's already bad in France and other economic countries. Linking Words
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, in Paris, architects are now trying to bring more green and more nature into buildings for men and women to breathe normally and with less pollution. What is the point to be in the CBD if the world falls apartLinking Words
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To sum up
, we just described two crucial points for people to keep living in the suburbs or the countryside. One shows that there is not enough space in CBD and the other that the planet will not survive. Linking Words
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, I firmly believe that everyone should decide where they want to spend their free Linking Words
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they are willing to spend on the roads. Other solutions should be discussed to reduce transportation problems.Use synonyms
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