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Some people say that the educational success of a student is the result of the work of a good teacher. Others say it depends on the character of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is said that the educational achievement of a
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 is dependent on how much effort a teacher puts
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, some people argue that the attitude of the
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 is more important. In my opinion, I believe that both the teacher and the
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 needs to be in the right mindset in
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 to unlock a
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's full potential. Teachers play a very vital role in the growth of a child. They are in charge of teaching the
students
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 and allocating them the necessary resources in
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 for them to pass their curriculum. With proper guidance and mentorship,
students
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 are able to understand new information and concepts in classrooms so that they are well-equipped with the necessary knowledge to pass exams and excel academically. A prime example would be a high school in Malaysia where they enrol
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 that did not do well in their exams.
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, with strict principles and values set by the teachers, many
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 were able to turn over a new leaf and perform well academically. Since
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 the school has produced a lot of successful
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 who have done very well in society. That being said, the work of a teacher is only efficient if the
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 is willing to listen to their advice.
Students
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 may find it hard to follow instructions from adults who are not their parents. It may take them a
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 to find the mindset and be willing to take in instructions or feedback from others.
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, they are able to take constructive criticism or suggestions to heart and find different ways to improve
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their studies so that they can get the best outcome possible.
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, prestigious schools take in
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 who have achieved the highest grades in their recent exams. But there are still
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 who do not do well for themselves after graduation despite being in an environment
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 catered for them to be successful.
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 shows that
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 need to pull their own weight as well in
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 to score well on their tests. In a conclusion, I think that teachers must ensure that their work is of the finest standards and
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 must be diligent in their studies in
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 for
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 to do well academically.
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