Nowadays,tutors think that international pupils swap would be beneficent for all youthful school pupils. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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. They can learn in the same scheme as another language which improves their English skills.
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, they will be studied at prestigious educational institutions and get certificates and qualifications.
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they will get first impressions with candidates when they start
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the number of professors in the world will increase.
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, living in foreign countries can be really dangerous for
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mature
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. Meeting with a completely unfamiliar environment for young
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. If you
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help in a serious matter, you will have to do it yourself.
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,
young
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generation always
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parents or someone who can take care of them and protect them from unexpected problems.
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, if children get sick they need care and support. In my opinion,
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of that age should stay their country with
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people
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they are used to. Experts
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recommend
that students try international exchange
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studying at university. In conclusion,
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overseas students might have some detrimental effects, the outstanding
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benefits
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