The two pie charts show the sources of income of ANZ theatres and heritage trust, à government funded organisations, in the year 1980 and 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the trust generate their
income
through four sources in the years 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the chart gives information about the highest source of earnings is individual and other organisations is
62% and 36% in both given periods of time respectively.
Change the verb form
are
Moreover
, the contribution of government grants was 25% in 1980, which fell slightly to 20% in 2000. The shop sales contributed 18% in 1980, which also
fall sharply to 11% in 2000. Finally
, the last
source of income
, the tickets comprised significantly less that is
7% in 2000 and 22% in 1980.
Thus
, it is clearly visible from the pie charts that the three sources of income
had been
decreased in 2000. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the only one
source Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
is individual and other Correct pronoun usage
apply
organisations
Change noun form
organisations'
organisation's
income
have
risen compared to 1980.Change the verb form
has
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