In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. What do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
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movies and novels were famous around the Correct word choice
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dramas
are also
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are one of the best way
to kill the time or get entertained. Particularly, books and shows subjected to Change to a plural noun
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crimes
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seem
gaining
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top
spotlight among other genres from the Correct article usage
the top
people
’s perspective. There are factors driving this
trend, in this
essay let’s discuss those factors and draw an opinion towards them.
Firstly
, people
are curious about what makes the crime scene like cause and path
to resolve the crime incident as Correct article usage
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of
like solution. For Change preposition
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an
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tv
show named money heist Correct article usage
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grab
the attention Add the particle
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due to
its plan of action to procure the
money and escape the situation without getting caught. Correct article usage
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In addition
to these, reasons that
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forces
the lead role to opt for Change the verb form
force
such
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the such
a such
drastic
path. Correct article usage
a drastic
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result
leads Add a comma
,result
people
to stand on their toes to know what happens next. Also
, knowing the cause makes people
sensible enough in the real life too to maintain diversity by giving equal opportunities to avoid such
incidents.
Secondly
, folks are getting hyped by the way few
characters carrying out the blood path in the scenes. To demonstrate, an innocent boy Correct article usage
a few
turning
out to be a killer to take revenge against Wrong verb form
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man
who is responsible for his parent’s death. Even though his actions were based on the Add an article
the man
a man
act
carried out, still there was law and enforcement which could have Replace the word
activities
handle
it in Change the form of the verb
handled
better
way. Nowadays, it creates a bad influence on young minds by projecting to get Add an article
a better
a
justice by themselves without concern of laws. Making them Remove the article
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to
think on their feet to revolt against the facts which caused injustice to them. Change the verb form
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Such
crimes
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crime
dramas
and novels needs
to be reduced. To maintain a peaceful law in Change the verb form
need
the
society.
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although
there are
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is
negative
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a negative
impact
on Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
the
society Correct article usage
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which
can be handled by bringing in some alternative endings to those incidents. After Correct pronoun usage
they
all
it is just Add a comma
,all
an
entertainment Correct article usage
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to
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for
people
. In my opinion
we should have Add a comma
,opinion
such
crime novelty and dramas
showcased to people
about the things that might occur in the
society either to for awareness about the Correct article usage
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crimes
or to
avoid those incidents which Change the verb form
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drives
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crimes
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