In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. What do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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movies and novels were famous around the
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. In
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to
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these
dramas
are
also
spiked around recently, as books and
dramas
are one of the best
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to kill the time or get entertained. Particularly, books and shows subjected to
crimes
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to
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top
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spotlight among other genres from the
people
’s perspective. There are factors driving
this
trend, in
this
essay let’s discuss those factors and draw an opinion towards them.
Firstly
,
people
are curious about what makes the crime scene like cause and
path
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to resolve the crime incident as
of
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like solution. For
an
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instance
tv
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show named money heist
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the attention
due to
its plan of action to procure
the
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money and escape the situation without getting caught.
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to these, reasons
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forces
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the lead role to opt for
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drastic
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path.
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result
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leads
people
to stand on their toes to know what happens next.
Also
, knowing the cause makes
people
sensible enough in the real life too to maintain diversity by giving equal opportunities to avoid
such
incidents.
Secondly
, folks are getting hyped by the way
few
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characters carrying out the blood path in the scenes. To demonstrate, an innocent boy
turning
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out to be a killer to take revenge against
man
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the man
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who is responsible for his parent’s death. Even though his actions were based on the
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carried out, still there was law and enforcement which could have
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it in
better
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way. Nowadays, it creates a bad influence on young minds by projecting to get
a
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justice by themselves without concern of laws. Making them
to
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think on their feet to revolt against the facts which caused injustice to them.
Such
crimes
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dramas
and novels
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to be reduced. To maintain a peaceful law in
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society. To summarize,
although
there
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negative
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impact
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on
the
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society
which
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can be handled by bringing in some alternative endings to those incidents. After
all
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it is just
an
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entertainment
to
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the
people
. In my
opinion
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we should have
such
crime novelty and
dramas
showcased to
people
about the things that might occur in
the
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society either to for awareness about the
crimes
or
to
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avoid those incidents which
drives
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to
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crimes
.
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